Nihao,

I was wondering if anybody could do a grammar shred of my prologue to
TM! No Need for the Throne.  I'm look for some one to do a Freemage
level grammar shred of the work.  (Please?)  I'll send the file to any
interested individuals.  Please reply via private response.

Ja ne,
Rei-chan

--
Ikari Ayanami Rei
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I can't tell what's inside anymore,
It could be I'm alright, like before...
Black or white,
I've lost my sight,
Can't tell what's inside anymore...

Ooh, what sleep is I know I'll never know,
And all my tears that seem to drench me,
Have faded into blue...

And I wait for the time I see in my mind,
Looking long and hard at what I might find,
And I awaken from my eternal dream
All that it might seem...
My humanity has died.

 A poem written by the designated pilot
 of Eva Unit-00 after her third
 awakening...