After the initial interest in the story, my C&C seemed to dry up.
If you like it, or have any thoughts, on it please let me know.

No one is posting C&C because the last few chapters aren't interesting. 
You were off to a strong start--an interesting environment and spin on 
the characters, and you stayed focused on what made it interesting. 
You've moved away with what makes your fic interesting, and I warned you 
about falling into this trap from the very beginning.

Get things back on track immediately, or else this fic will continue to 
meander until you get bored and stop working on it.

I was toying with the idea of using a variation of your world for 
writing a fic of my own, but I have yet to come up with a premise that 
excites me.




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