Saotendo wrote:

"No, I don't even know if my mother is alive or anything. 

It's probably going to occur to someone to at least try to find her. I
imagine Soun at least knows her name.

And as for my dad
telling me about this"  Ranma said as she gestured at the room in

general.

"He never needed to tell me about it."

Heh.

"Well, Kasumi is the best one to talk to about this."  And with that

Akane and

Nabiki turned and quickly left the room. 

After all, those two certainly don't want to have to deal with it ^_^.

Shampoo was overhead in the rafters.  She watched as the girl collapsed. 

She

didn't think this was a good sign.  It looked like she wasn't going back

to

her village as quick as she thought.  In fact if things were as bad as

they

looked, great-grandmother might have to come here.  Shampoo started

composing

a message to her great-grandmother in her mind.

That should at least start to clear up things, although I don't think
she'll be especially happy with Shampoo's method of scaring the hell out of
Ranma to get her to Japan faster with all that's happened. And how long are
you planning to keep Ranma from hot water. Even given his/her luck Ranma's
going to get some eventually.

All in all this was an excellent chapter. Grammar was good and it moved
along well. I anxiously await the next chapter.

D.B. Sommer