Eugh.  Two fanfics of the Asuka/Rei variety, one inspired by the
other.  Zhou Tai An's story is a bit better polished, but I think I
appreciate "Ikari Yui"'s plot a bit more for its non-surreal elements.

	(Of course, I can't honestly see Asuka *ever* doing this sort of
thing, or even considering it, when she has Hikari available, but ...)

	Nicely done, in both cases, even though I *seriously* hate the
premise.  (But then, 99% of lemons involving Ayanami-san squick me, which
normally takes graphic depictions of a serial killer's trade.)  The
portrayal of Asuka's slightly -- okay, *extremely* loopy psyche is right on
the mark, and the way you both set it up makes the premise believable.

Chris Davies.
(And that, dear readers, is how you give positive C&C about things you don't
like.  Paying attention, Gubby?)