Subject: Re: [FFML] [FANFIC][Slayers][Lime] Suggestions For A Title Gladly Accepted
From: Jeanne Hedge
Date: 9/24/1998, 6:04 PM
To: Chris Davies
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

I like the title you've got on it now  ^_^

btw....

	Naga was just as far gone as I was, but I think she thought I was
further.  She gently pulled me up from where my head was resting on her
stomach, and gently kissed me on the forehead.

	"I love you, Lina-chan," she whispered. 

	No one had ever told me that they loved me before.

	I still haven't told anyone I love them.

				*   *   *

	"So what happened?" Amelia asks quietly.

	"A couple days after we ... were together for the first time ..."
She blushes, but obviously understands what I'm saying.  I swallow the lie
mixed with the truth that follows.  "... I overheard *him* joking with
some people in the inn where we were staying about the ... the flat-
chested little dummy *he* had to hang around with."  All at once, I can
hear that mad, insincere laugh of hers again, and I clench my teeth in
remembered anger and despair.  "I kind of lost my temper," I choke out.


Is the *him* and *he* a typo? Otherwise, I dn't know which him and he Lina
heard talking about her





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