Hmm. First, for a title, might I suggest "Allies and Enemies"? Playing 

off

the Starcraft slogan, of course.

  Sounds utterly corny, but how about "Invasion Japan?" ;)

Second of all...

| 	"Brother..."
| 	He looked up at her, the world in complete clarity around him.
| "Yes?"
| 	"What are..."
| 	"You are the first of many."
| 	The Kuno siblings both looked up at the towering form.  It's
| single eye regarded them as if they were the insects and it was the
| magnifying glass.
| 	"You are but the first of many, and when our numbers are
| sufficient, this planet will be ours.  There are none that will stand
| against the Zerg."
|
| 		...

Gah. And the Terrans without reliable flame-throwers or laser or 

nuclear

technology. (Cloaked Ghosts with a Defensive Matrix and an escort of 

several

dozen Marines and Archons. Nukes. The Overmind. Worked for me.)

Of course, since you're introducing the Zerg now, there are other
opportunities for divergence as well. Perhaps...

  Uhhh... Kuno and Kodachi siding with the Zerg doesn't sound too 
pretty, considering what they did to Kerrigan. Of course, as soon as the 
Overmind realizes that Kuno ain't exactly the paragon of man, he'll be 
scot free :)

//Greetings, Terrans. I am Tassadar, of the Templar, and I have come to 

aid

you.//

***

This was too much to resist, especially considering that the Protoss 

run on

what they call Psi...

  Except for the tiny fact that Tass is dead (well, then again, since 
the Overmind DID appear, this must be before that, then...). Zeratul and 
the Dark Templar hanging with the Nerimites would kick, however :)

***

Ranma: "Egh, what the heck are you?!" 

Zeratul: "My kind have been persecuted for many centuries, human, and 
you dare to mock me?!" (unsheathes bad-arse warp blade-- oops, was that 
your hydra? ;)

"That's my story and I'm sticking to it."--JMS, creator of Babylon 5. 
"If you go to Z'ha'dum, you will die."--Kosh, Babylon 5.
"Understanding is a three-edged sword."--Kosh, Babylon 5. 
"Never show your hand until the end."--me, being profound. 

--Razorclaw X

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