Hwei! Hwei! She wrote more! :)
	I must admit, I think I have to go re-read the previous chapters,
again, 'cos the beginning of the story was kind of odd. I vaguely remember
the Kunous getting their hands on something.... Eh.
	It was pretty good. One thing, though; be careful in the POV
switches, that they're not too disjointed. I'm not sure how exactly to
advise you on that, but...I guess, just try to keep it smooth. Anyway, I
do hope you have more soon. :)

Andrew Huang
http://www.hcs.harvard.edu/~alhuang/ (Webpage being rebuilt)
Harvard Anime Society, President
"Mweh. Heh. Heh."