I must say, this part was my favorite one yet!
On Wed, 14 Oct 1998 catbert25@juno.com wrote:
lost. "Now you can get a job," said Ranma coolly.
Ryoga froze up.
Heh, lazy pig...:P
Akane was holding a jar of Mayonnaise, a jar of peanut butter,
and a jar of honey. "Well it seemed a little dull, so I thought I'd liven
it up a little," said Akane cheerfully.
"Get it right first, then liven it up a little. Cooking is
supposed to be a little dull," said Ranma with a frown.
Akane hung her head and returned the items to their places.
Soun looked on from the kitchen doorway with Kasumi and both his
daughters.
"Electro shock therapy? Very clever," said Nabiki.
A shock came from the room and Akane gave another little yell.
"Watch the food Akane, you don't want to burn it," said Ranma's
voice.
*ROTFLOL* This was my favorite scene! :) A very creative way for Ranma to
put Akane in her place with regards to cooking.
The smoke was from her, all her hair was standing up strait and
her clothes were smoldering. She had a large grin on her face and a tired
looking Ranma walked behind her with her finger in a bandage. Akane
proudly placed the curry pot on the table.
There is a typo in the above paragraph as well as a comma splice. The
first line should read as follows:
The smoke was from her; all of her hair was standing up straight and
"Worm! How dare you disobey me?!" she screamed at the ninja and
sent one of the blue balls of energy into his chest. Sasuke was blasted
into the wall hard and he screamed. She shot two more before he could
recover and kicked him in his side as he staggered form the hole in the
wall she had created.
Ouch, poor Sasuke. "Doormat-type servant" amplified to the max. I hope for
his sake that someone can beat some sense into Kodachi. Here she is truly
twisted and evil. Hopefully Ranma will notice Gosunkugi is missing soon;
perhaps Sasuke will tell her where she is. After what she just did to him,
he'll probably escape from her whenever he gets a good chance.
BTW, some of your quotes were messed up (there were strange characters),
although others were fine. (Damn Microsoft, they could at least make their
software more friendly with regards to outputting text files. Myself, I
use Wordperfect 5.1 for DOS. :P)
-Philip Mak (pmak@cs.dal.ca)
http://is2.dal.ca/~pmak/ukyou.html