Handy C&C Form (Short Answer):
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1) Do you feel any characters are acting badly Out Of Character?
[15 pts]
Nope. No OOCing here.
2) Do you feel any characters are exhibiting cliched fanfic
behavior? [25 pts]
Not in this fic.
3) Does the plot flow well, or does it feel contrived?
[20 pts]
Yes, a good flow...
3a) What was your opinion of Akane's temporary curse?
[25 pts]
Excellent concept; makes for good comedy.
4) What is your opinion of Akira Tsu?
[15 pts]
Ok...Are you going to do anything to balance out for his normalness,
or do we have another Gonsuki on our hands?
Extra credit (Essay):
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5) Explain, in five hundred (500) words or more, why cuteness is
[25 pts]
is most important Virtue. Use examples, including, but not
limited to:
a) Mihoshi (Tenchi Muyo)
b) Mokona (Magic Knights Rayearth)
c) Shiko (Project A-ko)
Cute. Kawaii. Or if you prefer, the suffix "-chan". Mihoshi as
cute? Only if you find blonde ditzes cute. C-ko as cute? I'm not
into kids, sorry. Mokona? Can't say, since I haven't seen Magic
Knight Rayearth. But I did glimpse at a webpage and saw The Redhead.
then I read "A Duet of Pigtails." She appears cute.
True cuteness comes from a limited set of sources. The first and
formost is Ukyou Kuonji. She's beautiful, smart, and skilled.
Another is Nanami Jinnai, although some would say she's another Nabiki
[but she's not, thank the gods]. And let us not forget Kiyone Makibi
[although she is rather career oriented].
Sorry...500 words are too much.
No bonus for me.....
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Thor Odinson
Grand Paladin and Acting Patriarch of
The Church of Ukyou, located at:
http://clubs.yahoo.com/clubs/thechurchofukyou
Unofficial Forger of the BFS-9000 Spatula
Author of "A Tale of Two Crowns"
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