Handy C&C Form (Short Answer):
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1) Do you feel any characters are acting badly Out Of Character?    

  [15 pts]
Nope.  No OOCing here.

2) Do you feel any characters are exhibiting cliched fanfic

behavior?  [25 pts]
Not in this fic.

3) Does the plot flow well, or does it feel contrived?              

  [20 pts]
Yes, a good flow...

3a) What was your opinion of Akane's temporary curse?               

  [25 pts]

Excellent concept; makes for good comedy.

4) What is your opinion of Akira Tsu?                               

  [15 pts]
Ok...Are you going to do anything to balance out for his normalness,
or do we have another Gonsuki on our hands?

Extra credit (Essay):
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5) Explain, in five hundred (500) words or more, why cuteness is    

  [25 pts]

   is most important Virtue.  Use examples, including, but not
   limited to:
    a) Mihoshi (Tenchi Muyo)
    b) Mokona  (Magic Knights Rayearth)
    c) Shiko   (Project A-ko)

Cute.  Kawaii.  Or if you prefer, the suffix "-chan".  Mihoshi as
cute?  Only if you find blonde ditzes cute.  C-ko as cute?  I'm not
into kids, sorry.  Mokona?  Can't say, since I haven't seen Magic
Knight Rayearth.  But I did glimpse at a webpage and saw The Redhead. 
then I read "A Duet of Pigtails."  She appears cute.  

True cuteness comes from a limited set of sources.  The first and
formost is Ukyou Kuonji.  She's beautiful, smart, and skilled. 
Another is Nanami Jinnai, although some would say she's another Nabiki
[but she's not, thank the gods].  And let us not forget Kiyone Makibi
[although she is rather career oriented].

Sorry...500 words are too much.

No bonus for me.....


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Thor Odinson
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The Church of Ukyou, located at:
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Unofficial Forger of the BFS-9000 Spatula
Author of "A Tale of Two Crowns"
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