And that is how the story begins
I know, because I was there.

You know, this is, like, incredibly good.

Dropped out of high school, you say?  Go get that GED.  You'd
pass the test in your sleep.  :)

Kidding aside, this was very well done for free-form poetry.
Just enough hints of What Is To Come to arouse my interest.  I'd
sure like to see how the rest of this fic goes if this is a
sample of how you're going to write.  ^_^

Not much in the way of C&C - not much to comment about at this
point.  But so far, so good.

-- Craig Putnam

-Richard