Many people wrote many things :

I mean, Gary said what he thought about my fic. Nicholas Leifker said
what he tought about my fic and Gary's thoughts about it. I DID
appreciate both opinions. Really... But was it really worth the
bickering you went into ? 
Heck, what am I doing, criticising my first readers ever ??!
Damn...Errr... Don't hate me for saying it, okay !?

Anyway, I'm gonna work on it again, as I already said. And I'll keep in
mind what Andrew Norris said. That's probably going to be quite a
help...


Mata ne !

Delphine