Gary Kleppe wrote:

Deedo Hibiki <deland@club-internet.fr> wrote:

He had been thinking about a lot of things laying in the park.

All the

misunderstandings, the fiancees, his enemies, his mother and all

the

troubles that had been plaguing his life lately. The outcome of

all

those reflections were bad for his self-image.

I *think* "laying" is wrong, but I'm not 100% sure of the correct

form.

Well, I don't know for sure either : I've looked into my dictionnary,
and it seems to be the right form. But it DOES sound weird.

It should be "lying." "Laying" would be used if he were doing it to
something else, e.g. brick-laying, or a han laying an egg.

Ok, ok guy's I'm changing that.

By the way, what do you think is better, send the draft of the first
chapter, or wait until it's revised (in three or four days) to send it
to the ML ??


Tony