I must first say that I know nothing about 
MAC+. This may explain my problems with this fanfic.

Well . . . THAT could be a problem . . .

I did not get any
feel for the characters, either within the story
or as characters from the Ranma 1/2 universe. The NAMES
were familiar but . . . the characters themselves were missing . ..  :(

Sorry, but while I would understand about my writing not being perfect due
to the short time span I had put into this . . . OOC?  I found the Ranma
cast to be just as they were in the manga (and I've owned all of them),
just not in the standard fanfic cannon (where Ranma's unbeatable and
Shampoo's just plain bimbo while Akane's uncapable of being feminine) ,
that's all .

Nice sense of action. Good overall plot and nice technothriller
style. I did like the idea and look forward to the next revision.
(think Tom Clancy)
Good Luck

I don't think there's gonna be too much of a revision, but thanks for that
at least :)

A.W.