On Sun, 31 Jan 1999, Chan Wei Lik wrote:

Took you long enough. I almost forgot what this was all about.

I bogged down on how to get some plot elements to come together and how to
write certain future scenes without spoiling elements of the ending of
Sailor Moon Z.  Having figured out that Sailor Moon Z likely will not
be finished being written in this millenium, I decided to just do the best
I could.
 

Good cameo of Keiichi. And 12th century? You make it sound as if they have
kids all over the place.

It was part of a metaphor intended to show the gap between the cycles he
could build and those people on Earth could manage.
 

>From your narration, it seems as if you have ignored all the discussion
about the Planet Smasher.

Ok, I just read part 7 on your site. Brilliant excuse, but I still say you
should use a smaller bomb. Something occured to me after reading this
however:

The rest will simply be dispersed by the explosion.

It seems to me that the standard idea for anti-m bombs is to destroy the
target with the energy burst from the explosion. But how about this: You
have a core where the explosion takes place. Surrounding this core (and
separated by a suspension field) is loosely packed antimatter. When the bomb
explodes, it scatters the exterior antimatter which cause more havoc when it
touches normal matter.
The antimatter fragmentation bomb. Great for large closed spaces
Just had to get it down before I forgot.

Oooh, that's a cool idea.  I will likely rewrite Wasyuu's bomb in the
second draft of this tale to do that; it's perfect for what they need the
bomb to do.  Thanks!

John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
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If it has passed from the high and the beautiful to darkness and ruin, that
was of old the fate of Arda Marred; and if any change shall come and the
Marring be amended, Manwe and Varda may know; but they have not revealed it,
and it is not declared in the dooms of Mandos.
--Final Line of The Silmarillion