Looks like a decent start, with no serious problems, although you
might want to come up with some reason why Ai is able to glomp
despite being a hologram.  You know, it might be more interesting if
Ai started out unable to glomp and frustrated by it.

Exactly it would be funny if she still tried but fell through Trunks, 

every

time she saw him.

Ah, but being a child of Ataru, she will find a way to do the 
impossible.

Phil

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