Subject: Re: [FFML] (MsT/C&C) [Icz/Tekno][LEMON Version] Operation Lightsphere: Phase 3 ch.2
From: Andrew Dynon
Date: 2/4/1999, 1:59 AM
To:
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Andrew: Yes! Brian finally got around to MSTing this.

[an 11-year-old girl with white hair in two tails at the side of her head
enters and sits down beside him.]

Ruri: I assume you've got guests organised.

Andrew: Uh, well, that is...

Ruri: (sighs) Have to use her, I guess. Omoikane, engage boson jump.

(There is a blue glow, and a blonde girl wearing a Space Knights uniform
appears.  She is Yumi Francois, from Tekkaman Blade II)

Yumi: Hi everybody! (turns to Andrew) D-san's in this story, ne?

Andrew: Not so much this chapter.

Yumi: Aw, darn.

[snip intro]

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From: Andrew Dynon <adyn1@students.latrobe.edu.au>
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] [Icz/Tekno][LEMON Version] Operation Lightsphere: Phase 3
ch.2

 Nicole, Yui and Natsumi: <blink>

 Nicole: We're reviewing a LEMON??? <gives Death Glare(tm) to Brian>

 Brian:<sweatdrops> Well...it is the more complete version.   

Ruri: As in "shows completely everything". (gives Death Glare(tm) to Andrew)

[snip my rant]

Oh, and finally, "Neon Genesis Evangelion" is now an official part of OL
continuity.  However, most of the canonical events (i.e. the TV series
and
movies) take place in an alternate reality.  More info on that when I
write
"Nagisa^2".

 Yui: Woohoo!!

 Brian: Yeah, thought you might like that.  I really want to see how you
explain away Eva in this universe, Andrew.

Andrew: <VEG>

Okay, that's enough bandwidth wasted.

 Brian: Bushwah!  You can never waste too much bandwith!

 Natsumi: ..."Bushwah"?

 Nicole: And what about spam?

 Brian: <sweatdrops> Well...spam's different...it's evil...well...never
mind, continue.


OPERATION: LIGHTSPHERE
An Iczer/Teknoman crossover fanfic
by Andrew Dynon

Any & all C&C NEEDED, MSTs especially welcome.

 Nicole: Here ya go!
  
Andrew: Thanks!

Phase 3, Chapter 2:
Together Once More: 2087 Chapter*

 All: <blink, and groan>

 Brian: Gee...now, which fic are we talking about here? :-)

[Yumi groans as well, then whacks Andrew]

Yumi: Leave the puns to Lurker!

	[* A. Notes: I was trying to come up with a good title which referred to
the chapter's main focus, and this happened to come into my mind.  Any
resemblance between this chapter and Chris Davies' fics is purely
coincidental (although Brian Yaple, who has been MSTing this fic, was
described in ALSW as "Chris Davies lite" and also wrote an Iczelion fic)]

  Nicole: Uh oh...

  Brian: <ego swell>

  Yui: <draws Stormblader and pops the ego balloon>

OP: "Love Reflection" (the ED for Gundam Wing OVA 1.  No, this fic has
nothing to do with GW, and I can't see a way that it (or any Gundam)
could
fit into the OL universe at this stage.  It's just a cool song, that's
all.)

  Brian: Mental note: Must find lyrics.


	She was floating.  Floating through space, but not the cold, dark space
that her physical body would die in if it waas not protected.  Space here

  Yui: extra "a" in that "was".

Andrew: D'oh!

was filled with vibrant, ever-shifting colors - now green, now yellow,
now
orange - and as the color of space shifted, so did the color of the
stars.
Nagisa's astral body was naked, but that did not worry her - in fact, to
cover her body would be to hide something from the woman she wished to
contact, and she had as little need and desire to hide anything as
Iczer-One
had to do so to her.

  Nicole: Plus, Iczer-One's already seen her in her birthday suit, so to
speak.

Andrew: True.

  Yui: Well...that was several incarnations ago.

  Brian: <stuffing tissues up his nose> Well, one important question must
be asked...

  Natsumi: Uh boy...

  Brian: <grin> Has her talent size changed?

Ruri: Baka.

  Nicole, Natsumi, and Yui:
<crashboomManaFlareRadianceNovaGabriel'sJudgementcrunch>

Andrew: So Yui attacked Brian with one of Warhammer's fics?

[An "Akane Tendo approved" mallet is thrown from off-screen, hitting Andrew]

WH (off-screen): That's SERAPHIM'S Judgment!

  Brian: <road pizza>

Andrew: <something similar to Brian>

	She caught sight of Iczer-One, also naked, her long golden hair being
blown
by a nonexistent wind, and the usual calm smile on her face - a smile
which
told her that there was nothing to worry about, that she would always be
safe while they were together.  The pair floated closer, and Nagisa
spoke.

	"Kterha, tsayeth."  The Kthulhu language was simple to Nagisa.  Even
though
the subtleties of its pronunciation would have taken years of intense
study,
it was as if she had spoken it every day since she was born.

  All: Huh?

Andrew: Loosely translated, "Greetings, my beloved."


	"Kterha, Kai Nagisa."  Iczer-One replied.  Her name actually sounded
strange to her when Kthulhu was being spoken.  "I have truly missed you."


  All: Oh.

  Brian: A translation guide would really help here. 

Andrew: Well, I was *going* to put one in my notes...

Yumi: ...but you forgot.

	"Me too, since I became aware again.  Soon, we can be with each other.
Finally."

	The astral bodies of Nagisa and Iczer-One floated toward each other,
edging
ever closer, until finally they touched, Iczer-One taking Nagisa's hand
in
hers.  

	"Iczer-One... thank you, for giving me power in that last fight."

	"Nagisa, there is no need to thank me for something I could not refuse.
Thank you for asking for my help."  Iczer-One replied.  Then, the pair
began
to drift further apart, and the colored space surrounding them began to
fade.  "It will not be long until we are truly together."

	The words echoed in Nagisa's mind as Iczer-One's image faded away.


   <snip New Year's breakfast>


	After she had showered and eaten breakfast, Nagisa returned to the
ship's
bridge.  Most of the others were there by that time - Kawai, Kiiro and
Nami
ware chatting together, while Mizuki and Shara sat, talking quietly. 
Star
and Tina remained on-duty at the helm and instruments respectively. 
Blade,
for his part, sat in silence.  The only crew member missing, Ringo, had
taken the shift on the helm before Star's and was currently asleep.

	"Nagisa, do you think we should send the Kthulhu our greeting yet?" Star
asked.

	"Yeah, it's probably a good time.  Tina, you've got the communications
equipment set up?" 

	"Ready anytime, Nagisa."

	Nagisa turned to the communication screen, and spoke.

	"Ktteu, lfur Chikyuu Lioct Iczelion Kai Nagisa.  Czewu rhie tyiwulf
kkthorhu.  Thua."  She spoke the language confidently and eloquently, and
paid no attention to the confused looks she recieved from her companions.
An adult Kthulhu with pale purple hair, dressed in the uniform of a
high-ranking officer, appeared on the screen and replied.


  Brian: Andew, a question: Has Nagisa *told* anyone else about her past
experiences with Iczer-One?

  Nicole: Or has Tina told Nagisa about her grandmother?

Andrew:  Uh, well... I'll answer that when I do the next chapter.

	"Ktaaerhiu, Chikyuu Lioct Iczelion Kai Nagisa-iczirhu. Kmue rhathu."

	"Lufoeth.  Ktteu-acz."  Nagisa ended the transmission, and gasped as the
realization of the true meaning of the mode of address the Kthulhu had
used.
"Nagisa-iczirhu"... to be worthy of the -iczirhu suffix, the *minimum*
requirement was to be a queen, and it was frequently used in prayers. 
What
did it truly mean they considered her to be?


  Natsumi: Again, a translation guide wouldn't hurt, but this was a good
look into Kthulhu politic and culture.

  Brian: Just as long as it isn't "protoculture".

  All:<shudder>

(Ruri presses a button, and a life-sized plush Zentradi falls on Brian's head)

	{You are Iczer-One's partner} her Iczel reminded her.  {Iczer-One is the
guardian of the Kthulhu.}

	{And, according to Kthulhu law and tradition, I am the same person as
her.}

	{Correct, Nagisa.  And the Kthulhu shall expect you to behave that way
when
you arrive.}
 
	"Guys, I'm going to my room for a few minutes.  I'll be back before
long."
Nagisa said as she left the bridge.

	Nagisa's Iczel was waiting for her as she entered her room, and she
smiled
at it.

	"Okay, Iczel, guess we'd better dress for a special occasion."

	The clothes Nagisa was wearing disappeared, and she felt energy flow
over
her body - not the intense, powerful form of her battle transformation,
but
soft and warm, like being immersed in the waters of a hot spring.   Her
arms, then her torso, then her legs and feet, were clothed in a
loose-fitting bodysiut of a type of bright red fabric which was warm and
strong, yet incredibly light and thin.  Then, her left arm, her torso
from
left shoulder to right hip, and her left leg were covered in a slightly
lighter-colored version of the same fabric.  More layers of the fabric,
ever
more lightly-colored, appeared over those parts of her body, until the
final
layer appeared - pure, brilliant white.  There seemed to`be a natural
flow
of colors from the bottom layer to the top.  

	Meanwhile, her hair wrapped itself around a silvery, palm-sized ornament
consisting of two interlocking rings which rested on top of her head,
several strands of hair running along each of the "pathways" to the top.
Where they converged, another small ornament held them together in a
ponytail that reached down to her shoulders.


  Brian: Arrgghh, Andrew.  This is just screaming for some fanart! :-)

Andrew: Pity I can't draw worth anything.

	As Nagisa reentered the bridge, everyone's eyes turned toward her,
stunned
by how different she looked after her change in clothing.

  Yui: Especially when it seems that they didn't pack too many clothes
when they left.

  Nicole: On a ship made of tinfoil?  Hah!  I wouldn't take the chance.

  Brian: <sweatdrop>

Andrew, Yumi: ..... <sweatdrop>

Ruri: ..... <no sweatdrop>


	"Nagisa-han, what's..."  Kiiro began to ask her.

	"Kthulhu ceremonial clothing.  I decided that it's a special occasion,
so I
should wear it.  Oh, and I sent the Iczels to bring you guys something to
wear, too."

  Yui: <blink> You "guys"?  Last time I checked, there were no male
Iczelions.

  All: <brief mental image of a group of men dressed as Iczelions that
leaves them rolling in the aisles for a few minutes>

 Brian: I'm sure she meant it as an expression, Yui.

Andrew: Well, I *have* heard the term "guys" used to refer to females before.

	By the time the ship had appeared out of hyperspace, a short distance
from
the Kthulhu's starship, all of the females aboard, excepting Star and
Mizuki, had been dressed in the same way as Nagisa, in colors
corresponding
to those of their Iczelion armor.

  Nicole: We say again, this is just screaming for fanart!

Andrew: Refer to my prevois statement concerning this.

	"Well, it looks like we're dressed for the reception."  Kawai commented.
"I'm just worried about how we should act."

	"Keep in telepathic contact with the Iczels.  They'll instruct you."

	Nami smiled.  "Well, we'll be docking soon.  At least it looks like
we'll
get a good reception."

[another snip]

	The pair stepped aside, allowing Nagisa to pass - the other humans did
not
move.  In front of her, there was a flash of blue light, and then Nagisa
was
finally able to see the person whom she had been longing to since before
her
present incarnation had been born.


  All: <gets the tissues ready>

	Iczer-One was dressed in garments similar to Nagisa's, but with only
hints
of white and yellow among the bright red her clothing was colored. 
Although
only a few seconds passed as she approached the Kthulhu guardian, it
seemed
to Nagisa, as it did to Iczer-One, as if an eternity was passing, with
each
of them slowly growing more joyous as the end of time approached.  Then,
time ended.  Nagisa felt Iczer-One's arms wrap around her body, at the
exact
same time she took hold of Iczer-One.  Then, their lips touched, and it
was
the only thing Nagisa desired to know.  She was lost in her kiss with
Iczer-One, and wanted to remain lost forever.		


  All: <bawling their eyes out>

  Brian: That was very well written, Andrew.  :`-)

Andrew: Thank you.

[snip]

	A hand touched her shoulder, and Nagisa knew who it was before she
turned
to see him - a boy, apparently teenaged like herself, dressed in a school
uniform, with grey hair and red eyes.


  Yui: <blink> How'd my brother get there?

  Brian: Wha...?

  Yui: <looks again> Okay, sorry, wrong person.  So...that's who they
named my brother after.

  Nicole: I thought he looked familiar.

	"Many of them believe we do not feel pain here." The boy said softly. 
"But
they are wrong.  In place of our own pain, we feel that of others. 
Although
you have not been here long, you know that."

	"Hai.  But, if she's my reincarnation..."

	"...then that means she is both fully you *and* fully herself.  Being
you
allows her to possess your emotions and memories, while being herself
allows
you to share her pain while she is in the material realm."


  Natsumi: Huh?

  Brian: Hmmm...I think I got that.  Non-ovbious reference to the whole
"souls" thing in the "infamous two" and EOE?

Andrew: Not really.  I think the original concept came from a novel I read 
years ago, which I've forgotten the title of.

	Nagisa glanced back toward the image of her granddaughter.

	"Can I ask..." She began to say, then realised the boy had disappeared.

	"Oh, it's so *annoying* when you do that."


  Yui: <groans> Yep, just like my brother.  He *always* does that
disappearing trick.


*	*	*	*	*

	{Saber...}

	Iczer-2's mental "voice" echoed in Cain Carter's mind, repeating his
name,
as he walked along the shadowy corridors toward its source.  Her voice
held
the same imperious, confident tone as he had always known it to have,
yet,
this time, there was something else in its tone - something alluring,
something filled with desire.  Cain followed the mental "trail", until he
reached its origin - Iczer-2, standing with her body armor removed, her
feet
together, her head bowed, appearing as if she were engaged in some sort
of
meditation.  Calmly, almost in slow motion, she awoke from her trance and
looked toward him.


  Nicole: Why am I getting a bad feeling here?

Yumi: TEKSETTER!!!

[Andrew glances nervously at Yumi as she transforms into her Tekkaman form]

	"So, you came for me." The redheaded android said.

	"What do you want?"

	"The same thing you do.  The thing you desire almost as much as your
brother's death.   You can have it."  Iczer-2 tore through the material
of
her bodysuit, allowing Saber to see one of her naked breasts.  An evil
smile
appeared on her face, and she spoke again.

	"You don't have to be gentle."


   Natsumi: 0_0;;;

   Nicole: -_-;;;

   Yui: =-P

   Brian: <nosebleed> 

  <snip the rest of that section>

Yumi: May I?

Ruri: Dozo.

Yumi: Arigato.  REACTOR VOLTEKKA!!!!

Andrew: ARRRRRGGGGGGHHHH!!!!!

Ruri: He lived.  Oh, well. [Charges the Nadesico's gravity cannon and fires it]

Andrew: [use your imagination]

   Nicole:...as Kasumi-megamisama would say...oh, my.

  Natsumi: You know, in some strange, twisted way...they deserve each
other.

  Yui: Well...at least she fulfilled that wish she had in the last Fight!
Iczer-One OAV.

  Brian: And moving on...

*	*	*	*	*  

	After the ceremony had ended, Nagisa and Iczer-1 turned and walked away
together, not feeling the need to exchange words with each other - at
least,
not in such a manner that others could hear them.  As they walked
together,
Iczer-1 wrapped her arm around Nagisa, her hand sliding under her
partner's
clothing and touching the bare skin of her shoulders.  Nagisa turned to
Iczer-1, the cheerful spark in her eyes shining even brighter than
normal,
and let out a giggle.


   Brian: Err...quick question here...

   Nicole: <holds up ball of Mana energy> This had better not be
preverted...

  Brian: It isn't!  It isn't!!  Err...how long *have* they been waiting
for...err...?

  Yui: Well...considering that the Iczer-One OAVs took place somewhere in
1987, and the current year being 2087, not factoring in any interference by
aliens, goddesses, or Sailor Pluto, the answer is...?

  Natsumi: <with calculator> ...about 100 years.  

Andrew: Actually, in the OL universe, the Iczer-One OVAs took place in 2015.
Make of that what you will.

  Nicole: <blink> That's...a heck of a long time to be waiting...

  Yui: Especially with hormones calling the shots. <pulls out Stormblader
and points it at Brian> Not a word.

  Brian: <sweatdrop>

	A door slid open, and a warm breeze wafted over their bodies.  The pair
entered the room, where a holographic representation of the space that
surrounded the Kthulhu vessel had been created, and the walls seemed not
to
exist.  As the door behind them closed, it too was replaced by the
holograms, completing the illusion.

  Brian: Hmm...reminds me of an old '80s sci-fi movie in the US called
"Ice Pirates."

Andrew: Either of you ever heard of that?

Ruri, Yumi: [blank stares]

  Nicole: You mean that one scene near the end?

  Brian: Yeah, that's it.

	As the artificial gravity disengaged and the pair let themselves float
freely together, Iczer-1 removed the complex garments Nagisa was wearing,
her firm, yet smooth and caring, hands sliding over Nagisa's body.  As
each
layer of her clothing was removed, Nagisa knew that her desire was
reaching
an even higher level, until finally, her sweat-covered body stripped
naked,
she embraced Iczer-1 and whispered in her ear.

	"Finally.  After so long."

	"Yes, Nagisa.  We don't have to wait any longer."

	Then, it was Nagisa's turn to strip Iczer-1.  First the robes Iczer-1
wore,
then her bodysuit, were taken from her body by Nagisa, and then she felt
Nagisa's form, soft and gentle, touching against her bare skin.  Nagisa's
tongue brushed against her, first her lips, then her breasts... and then,
her beloved let her body rotate in the weightless space, Nagisa's tongue
entered her vagina, at the same time as Iczer-1 placed her tongue in
Nagisa's.  As their bodies intertwined, their thoughtsmelded together.

   Nicole: <crosseyed> Way more information that we needed to know, thank
you...

Andrew: Uh, well, it's my first try at something like this, so I didn't know
how much info I really should have given.


	{Nagisa, thank you.  For helping me to love, and to be gentle.}

	{Iczer-1, thank you.  When you are with me, I know that nothing can hurt
me.}

	{I trust you absolutely, my beloved.  With my very soul.}

	{As do I.}


   All: Awwww.....

  Brian: That was touching, and absolutely romantic.  Nice job there,
Andrew.

	And finally, each of their minds ceded control to the other, both of
them
flowing into the other's body, experiencing the indescribable sensation
of
being truly one and the same.

END PHASE 3, CHAPTER 2
Ed: "Rainy Love", from the Iczer-1 Battle Music Collection CD

Well, I finally did it.  Was it really necessary?  Probably not, but the
idea of an Iczer-1/Nagisa lemon has been more or less stuck in my head
for a
long time now (I think I first hinted at it during my response to one of
Warhammer's MSTs), and hopefully, now it's in a fic, it'll be out of my
head.  There is one other Iczer fic I know involving "adult situations",
courtesy of Brian Yaple, and I am not sure which would be classified as
more
hentai.  On one hand, Yaple-san didn't write a full-on lemon.  On the
other
hand, my story did not involve chocolate frosting ;-).  I am aware of one
Tekkaman lemon story, but I'd really prefer not to discuss that (It's in
the
Sakura Lemon Fanfic Archive, but be warned that it is likely to induce
vomiting.)


  Brian: <eyebrow twitch> I said it before, and I'll say it again: Read
The Rewrite.

  Yui: <reads the mentioned lemon, then runs out to throw up> 

	I'll remind people once again that I need story ideas, without which it
will be some time before I continue.  As I mentioned at the start, the
story
will probably become darker, and at least one of the good guys will
probably
die in a future chapter (I'll let you guess which character(s) - there
may
well be more than one).

   Brian: If it's Nagisa...

   Nicole: <slightly glowing> We Will Have To Hurt You.

Andrew: I'm sorry, that's classified information at this time.  Oh, and like
I said, I do still need ideas.

	Oh, well, I guess I should get on to my other fics now.  BTW, Nagisa^2
is
"coming soon".

  Brian: Cool.


____________________________________________________________________________
___
Andrew Dynon

"Because passion is out of fashion, [we feel] we must denigrate anyone
who
feels passionately about something like a genre"
	- Joseph Michael Straczynski

  Brian: Otherwise known as the Great Maker.  :-)


There's a little bit of Sailor Moon in us all... but not the bit we'd
like to 
admit to having.


  Brian: Not much else to say, except sorry for dragging my heels like
this, Andrew.

  Nicole: Ja ne, everyone!

  <The four exit the theater>

Andrew: Ja ne!
_______________________________________________________________________________
Andrew Dynon

"Blessed are those with the gift of tolerance, for when they finally go 
ballistic, it can be truly satisfying."
	- Kaz Cooke