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From: UkyouKwnji@aol.com <UkyouKwnji@aol.com>
To: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: 13 February 1999 00:56
Subject: [FFML] [Greenwood] Extended Play, track ten

Good nigh- <looks at clock> er, good morning, everybody. ^_^

This is the one we've all been waiting for... Happy Valentine's
Day, minna-san!

**track ten**

Yay! Track ten! It's nice not to have to wait long to see the next part of
a great series like this come out. (Though I should talk, considering my
terrible punctuality ^_^;)

And maybe, just maybe, I can finally tell Suka-chan the truth.

If he *actually* does -- yeah right -- then... >_<  I'm looking forward to
it. No, really, there's nothing like the anticipation of a character
suffering as much as poor Suka-chan will. Heh.

Did I type that out loud?

I mean that I like the meaningful character growth involved in such tragic
moments. Yeah, they'll buy that...

"Look, I know it hasn't been a long time that we've known each
other, but I've got to say this:  I think... I think... I think I love
you."

Of course, this might make things just a *little* difficult to work out.
An inevitable result of what's been happening so far in this fanfic but a
good inevitability. How will Shun-chan get out of this without hurting
Suka-chan? Will he?

Now *I*m feeling sick to my stomach.

It might just be me but that  "Now *I*m feeling" looks a little awkward.
Perhaps "Now *I* am feeling"?

Well, well... that should leave ya wondering.

Certainly does. So, what will happen with a drunk Suka-chan and equally
drunk Shun-chan...?

This C&C (if you can call it that) was all IMHO, by the way. Sorry for the
lack of constructive C&C but I don't know Greenwood very well, so
character comments were out of the question. But the story's worth it and
the character's are well done enough that just a passing knowledge of the
series is all that needed. So, go look at some Greenwood sites, people,
and then come back and read all of "Extended Play"! It's worth it. :)

Itsu mo,
Ucchan   ^_^

~Kayu-chan
~Who really should be banned from doing 'C&C' after one o'clock in the
morning. See you in the morning... or afternoon....