Shinji fumed. "Better than fucking an old hag like you!" he
snapped. He regretted it as soon as Ritsuko grabbed him by his
condom-covered penis and dragged him towards the door. Shinji was
screaming in pain the whole way.

<lewd comments ahead>

 The condom must have been somewhat lubricated at this point - I
mean OW, that's some grip Ritsuko would have had to get..... OW OW OW.

Grip like a steel vise. :) I'll have to put that in. :)

     Misato seemed to notice for the first time that she was also naked,
so she covered herself up quickly. "Slimy little boy... I bet you jerked
off over my naked body!"

     "No! What kind of slimy pervert would do that!" Kensuke proclaimed
his innocence. "You invited me up here!"

 Another nice touch. More events from Shinji's real like seem to be
creeping into his fantasy here - this episode is advancing the different
layers of the plot more effectively than previous chapters, and it's
building up some good momentum.

Yup... to a Earth-shattering climax, one could say :)

not important right now. Neither is the fact that sweat was dripping
from them.

 Just in case we'd forgotten how much the writer was enjoying
himself...

Me? Never. I get no sick enjoyment out of writing Garden of EVA :)


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