Subject: Re: [FFML][EVA] Children of an Elder God pt.4 "Asuka Strikes!"!"
From: "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>
Date: 2/18/1999, 9:22 PM
To: Ronny Hedin
CC: Rod M <rpm@thekeep.org>, ffml@fanfic.com

On Thu, 18 Feb 1999, Ronny Hedin wrote:

As Homer Simpson would have put it, "Woohoo!"

Great stuff. Looking forward eagerly to the next one. A few comments:

       "Hey!  Rits-chan!  Misato-chan!" 

Minor, but... "Rit-chan", yes. "Rits-chan", no.
"Ritsu-chan", possibly, but the first one waaay more likely.

frequently had to place his head in the lion's mouth.  And
if SEELE ever found out their true objectives, the lion's

Wasn't it KEELE earlier? Or was that something else? I distinctly
remember than since I thought "isn't it supposed to be seele?" at
the time...

Keele is the person, SEELE is the organization.


John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
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