As Homer Simpson would have put it, "Woohoo!"

Great stuff. Looking forward eagerly to the next one. A few comments:

       "Hey!  Rits-chan!  Misato-chan!" 

Minor, but... "Rit-chan", yes. "Rits-chan", no.
"Ritsu-chan", possibly, but the first one waaay more likely.

frequently had to place his head in the lion's mouth.  And
if SEELE ever found out their true objectives, the lion's

Wasn't it KEELE earlier? Or was that something else? I distinctly
remember than since I thought "isn't it supposed to be seele?" at
the time...


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Ronny Hedin, thark@hem2.passagen.se, http://nabiki.newberry.edu/thark/
                    "Momomoto, famous japanese, can swallow his nose."