Subject: Re: [FFML][Fic][R1/2][First time author][Question] Untitled For Now
From: David Johnston
Date: 2/26/1999, 6:24 AM
To: MalaspinaM@aol.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Ryouga:  Oh c'mon, fight me!

Ranma:  I'm just too depressed to fight.

Ryouga:  Trust me, there's nothing like a brawl to cheer you up when
the world is a dark and lonely place.  It always works for me.

Ranma:  Really?

Ryouga:  Really.

Ranma:  DIE RYOUGA!

Ryouga:  That's the spirit!

But seriously folks...

       Ryouga smiled at the man he loved and thought how lucky he was. *If only the
world was more accepting of homosexuality my life'd be perfect* "Ran-chan,"

I don't object to the premise.  However, this thought from Ryouga comes off as more 
than a little preachy to me.  You might want to tone it down a little.