Ok, I've decided to take what I have, salvage what I can and scrap the rest.
I've come to realize that this happened way to fast, my writing sucks (I can
do better but I was rushing), and besides if I got a semi-positive reaction
for this crap imagine what'll I get once it's good! : ) For those of you who
were giving the positive reactions thank you so much and I hope you'll like
the fixed version even better. Also for you that want to see more of this, the
same people who gave positive reactions, I'd like to apologize right now for
the wait until more of this is seen. It will be seen though.

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