andrew norris wrote:

        Behind the retreating girl, the man spoke, "Wake up, son. We have to get
to Nerima."

Pre reader verison 2/27/99
FFML Verison 2/28/99
Based off an Idea from Bryan Neef.
CC welcomed at mage2099@dtgnet.com
Flames sent to fool@nowhere.com
Notes:  This idea came to me after Discussion with Bryan Neef over his idea
"Pain" and I wanted to do this idea variant.  This is just to show that A. I am
not dead, and B. that I AM writing�  I do expect many flames from this, And YES
this is a fiction where there will be VERY dark situations involved� However
Genma Haters should be happy.

Also Shampoo haters.  After all, she just stood around and let a group 
of men rape an unconscious girl without lifting a finger.  OK, so the 
Amazons aren't actually all that big on sisterhood, but personally 
even if Shampoo was out to kill someone I don't think she'd allow that
to be done to her opponent.  

For those asking about "Star Mage" I am rewriting in from scratch.
Note this fiction was written to "Hell is for Children" By Pat Bentar, and
"Jamie's got a Gun" By Aerosmith.

No, "Janie's got a Gun"

While it may be a Genma bashing fic at the start (not denying this...) I don't
really want to portary Genma as evil 

Hard to avoid it after this.  I mean at least the cat thing can be covered
as a stupid man trying to do something for what he thought was his child's good.  
The only way he could top this one is by selling his son as okonomiyaki topping.

(He isn't really... lazy self centered,

unthinking, mabye but NOT intenoily cruel...) I am writing the first arc to set
up the rest which I really want to write...

You don't have to use Genma that way if you don't want to.  Ranma could just as
easily have been fed drugged food and raped without Genma's complicity, since both
of them take gifts of food from strangers without a second thought.