I always wondered why I only read this in spurts... er a chapter at a
time I mean. Years later when I discover I need therapy, I'll be sure
to send you the bill. ^_^
Lara Bartram wrote:
Ignorant Irony
Ryuuji looked downcast. He didn't want Daddy to miss his
birthday. He was going to be a big boy; that's what Mommy had
said. He twisted the ear of his tiger nervously.
"How about if I make Daddy show up? Would like it if he
showed up?"
Would <you> like it if *Need a word*
A Mothers Love
A Darkfic
he cleaned out the closets, he washed the dishes, he cleaned the
kitchen until it sparkled. He cleaned the bathrooms, swept and
vacuumed under everything, made all the beds, did laundry and even
made lunch.
<He> cleaned out the *Capitalize*
The Last Battle
A Darkfic
The next day he was outside for lunch again. He hadn't
seen Katsura for the rest of the day the day before that and was
hoping she would find him. He hand't even opened his lunch and
was trying not to look like he was looking for someone.
He <hadn't> even opened his *Spelling*
Love and Understanding
He didn't sound very sincere. I didn't want him to do it
just because I wanted him to; I wanted him to want it." "Is that
all?"
"He stared at me with that flat gaze. I wanted him so bad
right then. "Yeah."
to want it. "Is that *Take off extra quotation mark*
He stared at me with *Take off extra quotation mark*
He nodded and opened his eyes slowly. "M... Mom. That
was awesome."
I smirked. Nothing I've ever done has been described as
awesome. "now, Ryu-chan, what about you? Are you hungry?"
"<Now>, Ryu-chan, *Capitalize*
He sat up his hair a mess though I don't know how. "Yeah,
Mom, but I want to start with dessert." he reached down to the
end of the bed and pulled the tray towards him. I was annoyed
until he got a spoonful of strawberries and juice and dropped it
on my chest...
<He> reached down to the *Capitalize*