Hi!

Muyami Academy
What if they ALL went to the same school?

       Chapter four.  

Yet another great chapter in this terrifically tangled 
web of anime characters and situations.... 
Well-written, and with the promise of many embarrassing 
moments, misunderstandings, and battles in the chapters 
to come! ^_^

I only have one small problem (and it really is just a 
quibble):  In a couple of places throughout the 
chapter, Aeka and Sasami and occasionally some of the 
others mention "earth".  

Now, I'm probably only mentioning this because I had a 
grade 11 teacher who jumped all over us whenever we did 
the same thing... but think about it.  

We capitalize Mars, Jupiter, Pluto, etc., and the names 
of every other planet in the known universe, real or 
imagined.  

So why not capitalize Earth?  It is a proper name, 
after all.  When you talk about earth without 
capitalizing it, you're really talking about that brown 
crumbly stuff that you grow plants in.  

Well, that was the only thing I noticed that I could 
criticize... ^_^ Great job!  I'm eagerly awaiting the 
next chapter!

Megan Jones                   bwerith@mac-addict.com
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