"You're going to have to ride in the entry plugs all the way to
Canada,"  Misato said, pointing to a map of North America.  "We won't have
the facilities to load you properly there.  Luckily, the special transport
planes FINALLY arrived tomorrow, and we can keep your batteries charged

                                     ^^^ I was thought Misato was
psychot--I mean, psychic.
                                         Or perhaps the planes arrived
yesterday?

	"We believe so,"  Misato said.  "We've dubbed him Salgiel,
the Angel of Snow.  We've launched a satellite that should be able to
track him, which will greatly simply this.  In fact, it should get a lock

                                           ^^ simplify?

three EVAs in a snowstorm would be too much fun for the pilots, most

                                           ^^ wouldn't?      

likely.  But there was nothing to be done.

I like the way this series is developing.  Although maybe it should be a
bit
more depressing and angst ridden then it is.  After all, EVA already gives
Gundam
a run for its money in that department, and when you throw in Lovecraftian
elements
as well...

Anyway, looking forward to future chapters.