Interesting, though I don't know squat about Inu-Yasha.  I suppose the
well/gateway would be more meaningful to me if I did.

My only other rant is the usual.  Show, don't tell.  Describe the scene
where Kusanagi is staking out.  Use as many senses as you can.

-Andy Searls
http://www.jps.net/searlsa

I'm not completely insane,
    some parts are missing.