It's an interesting idea, I suppose, but my biggest problem with this is 
Kuno. I realize this is an alteniverse fic, so maybe you've altered his 
personality to fit the kind of story you wanted to write, but Kuno just 
doesn't strike me as the "one night stand" kinda guy. Maybe it's my own 
bias, Kuno being one of my favorite characters, I dunno. It is a 
well-written story, though, and I did enjoy the Star Wars and EVA refs.

If my sanity asks, I was never here.
Kurt Markuson
The only only man to bring garlic bread to his anime club meeting as a 
snack.


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