David Johnston wrote:

Subject:
        [FFML] [SM/El-Hazard]Setsuna's Secret Ch 17, 18, 19 and afterword
  Date:
        Wed, 05 May 1999 02:32:09 GMT
  From:
        "Tom Mathews a.k.a. Disruptor" <godphoniex@HOTMAIL.COM>

Description:  Setsuna turns out be an android "Demon Goddess", from
El Hazard.  This leads the Crystal Tokyo senshi to travel to El Hazard
to investigate her origins and to try to remove the programming that
keeps her from being fully self-willed.

Comments:  The characterisation in this piece is usually pretty sappy.

Well, what do you want for a first fanfic?

I can't complain too much about that, since it is being faithful to
the source material, but that is the element I liked least about Sailor
Moon.

Oh well.

However, it is rife with grammatical and spelling errors.  Sending out
a call for a proofreader might be a good idea for the author.

I did ask for it to be torn apart by everyone and I will use the comments to revise. The
more comments on grammer and spelling, the better later fanfics will be.  Even if I
don't recieve the comments for theese last few chapters, I will try to revise.

I am the same person, I just didn't feel like cut & pasting this to the Hotmail account

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Upon hearing the rumor of the Legion of Super-Heroes Animated Series, I thought, *Think
of all the figures, all the merchandise, and think of the Pokemon like game.*

I choose you Triplacte Girl.