Heh.  Your song was good!  Your rhyming got a little sloppy towards the
end (I didn't know fiancee rhymed with oyaji), but you weren't setting
out to make this a poetic masterpiece, right?

Anyway, the line:

Akane's way to Tom-boy-ya
and Kawaii-kune to boot-a,

is absolutely great.  Hilarious. 

Rhyming Loca with Loca with Loca, OTOH... Unless that's part of the
original song, maybe something else would be better.
 
Anyway, it's funny, entertaining, and has laughs all around.  And hey,
you taught us about four new ways to pronounce the word "fiancee." :P

  Anna
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"Tis a far, far... " You know how it goes. ^_^
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