Jed Bidwell wrote:

        I have no idea what to do with this. I was in a bit of a melancholy
mood. As always, C&C is welcome and appreciated.

whatever you do with it, don't let it die.  it has too much promise.  try answering
these qusetions in cxhapter 1.  where did Ranma go for 30 years?  who is the girl's
father? What does Ranma have to do in town that hs'e in such a hurry for?
Go for it.  I'll be lookig foreward to reading it.

                                                                              KT out

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"Sometimes we must do things, not because they are the right things
to do, or the easiest things to do, or the ones that will bring us
rewards. Sometimes, we must do things because they must be done."
                  -- "Waters Under Earth" by Alan Harnum