Subject:
[FFML][ranma]2 in 1 Combo chpt. 2
Date:
Sat, 29 May 1999 05:46:26 EDT
From:
"Watura Rode" <watura_rode@HOTMAIL.COM>
Description: Obsessed and unbeatable martial artist
is looking for Shampoo.
Comments: I don't see the problem. Superman would
make a great husband for Shampoo, and since nobody can
beat him (as demonstrated by his defeating the entire
amazon village), they might as well give up right now,
unless they have some kryptonite lying around. Even then,
getting Ranma as a husband is a waste of time when they
could get this guy. Iffy spelling.
Hm... I never meant to make Ko di Shina out to be invincible. So...
he beat a few Amazons and Mousse. BIG DEAL! That's not much of a
spectacular feet if you really think about it. Shampoo is one of the
best Amazon fighters around, and Ranma beat her with one move. In
every Ranma episodes, any time someone uses a new fighting style that
hasn't been seen before, they are able to beat almost anybody.
Beating Mousse isn't much of an amazing task. He still gets his butt
kicked by any and everybody on que.
The real purpose behind my fic is for the reader to be see a new
person that wants Shampoo and for them to wonder why he does.
unfortunately, it seems that his actions exceed his being. I don't
plan on changing anything, but if you follow the story you'll see
there is more to Ko di Shina than just a desire to fight.
As for the spelling... It's only a little iffy on the third chapter.
And that's at the very begining author notes and the very end chapter
questions. They were typed at 4:00 am. It not much of an excuse,
but I'll work on fixing that.
Hopefully you can catch the word play I did when I made the name
Ko di Shina.
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