Hmmm... I think the titler should have read also [Poem] but that's up to you. 
I found it very true to the storyplot. and I agree with darkday, it's sad 
taht the OAV doesn't cover more, but still, it was a sweet story. Frankly, 
the first time I saw it, I was depress over a girl, and my friend popped the 
video into the VCR and said "here's some hardcore hentai for you buddy... 
cheer up" then he left. I ended up talking ot Ai, but what freaked me out 
more, was that she spoke back. creepy. Anyway, that's besides the point... 
Back to the fanfiction, didn't Youta get over Moemi-chan in the end? well, 
anyway, I thought it was good, and thought provoking! keep writing!