I don't want to sound too critical, but here
are my major complaints with this fic:

	1. The worlds of Ranma 1/2 and Dragon Ball are
completely different.
	2. This is almost exactly the same premise as
Dragon Ball 1/2 by Donny Cheng.
	3. I can't see Vegeta taking a student simply
because Goku is.
	4. The fanfic moves way too fast.
	5. Miscelleneous OOC behaviors.
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