Jason Liao wrote:
On Thu, 17 Jun 1999, Donny Cheng wrote:
It
was true that he had often been led astray by the sight of others such
as that amazon that claimed Saotome to be her husband,
Hmmm? When was this?
First time he saw Shampoo I think. He did his usual bit of offering her
to date him.
Roughly, she
pulled him to her until his face was an inch from her own.
Isn't he taller than her? How does this work, unless she unbalanced him.
And that wouldn't work well, either, unless she has *really* long arms.
I guess she could have pulled herself up, but I think that ruins the mood
you're trying to set.
Yanked him down would be better than pulled I guess.
Kuno was shaken as Akane released him. Indignantly, he patted his
crumpled gi down until it was smooth again.
I thought he what he wore is called something else besides 'gi'.
Many types of gi
"Uh, he slept... I mean, he is... oh my! How should I put this? Ryoga
has been sleeping with Akane for the past year."
"What!? But, but, what about Ranma?" Nabiki asked, her jaw dropping to
the ground at Kasumi's statement.
"Oh, him too. As well as me, Taro, Daddy, Shampoo, Ukyou, Konatsu,
Plum, Tsubasa..."
Hours later
"...Rouge, Shinnosuke, and Mrs. Saotome. And that's everyone. No wait, I
forgot Sayuri. Not you, though."
"..."
Heh :P
"We only found out yesterday while you were out on one of your dates
with Kuno. So, she's still a little sore and not talking to anyone
right now. She's becoming a vegetable, I'm afraid. I'll go up in a few
minutes to check on her again. In the meantime, could you do something
about Ryoga. Oh I didn't mean it like that, Nabiki," Kasumi said as her
sister developed a wild gleam in her eye and started to actually crack
her knuckles. Nabiki wasn't a violent sort, but Kasumi knew that her
sister had other ways of dealing with 'problems'. Ways that would make
a beating more preferable.
You know, when I read this, I was thinking that Kasumi meant that in the
same way that she was 'doing something' about Kuno, and that Nabiki was
about to show her sister how much she didn't appreciate it.
Silly, huh?
o_O No, Nabiki wouldn't do that. I should make it clearer.
"What? That's your brilliant plan?" Nabiki asked incredulously as she
listened to what Pig Boy had to say for himself.
Why would she refer to Ryouga as Pig Boy? That would be Ranma thinking,
not her.
She just recently found out, so fresh in her memory. Besides, get tired
of using boy, lost boy, martial artist, all the time :P
"You've got to be kidding me," Nabiki said, still shocked at what Kuno
was saying.
"I must have you both!" Kuno yelled leaping at Nabiki.
Fortunately for Nabiki, Akane's fist intercepted him. "Looks like you
did too good a job of pretending to be his girlfriend, Sis."
"You owe me big," Nabiki said through her clenched teeth as she
purposely walked onto of Kuno's spread-eagled body.
Oh dear, I can see it now.
"If you wish to date with Tendo Nabiki, you must defeat her in battle!"
<hordes of men armed with various sporting goods stream towards her>
Heh, Nabiki would eat all of them for breakfast if they would ever do
such a thing. There are worse things than a beating.
Mousse obediently followed. And almost slammed into the wall, had not
his glasses suddenly fall into place over the bridge of his nose. He
looked at Shampoo in front of him. He had thought for sure that someone
had placed his glasses from atop his head onto his face. *Was it her?*
*sigh*
The list knows of my opinions concerning Mousse, so I won't go into them.
Heh, I don't like him very much, but in this story trying to play him up
a bit. His and Kuno's characterization I find the hardest to grasp for
those reasons.
Thanks for the C&C! ^_^