Umm.... Just a couple of comments. You really should decide whether
you are going to use the japanese names or the english ones (i.e.
Misty/Kasumi), it is a little confusing the way you were jumping back and
forth with the names. Also, the flow is not quite as good as your Magical
Boy series, with a little polishing it could be quite good. The only other
thing i wanted to ask is, what happened to chapter 1?, if you posted it
recently, I must have missed it.

Ja Ne!

Chris

P.S. An answer key to the japanese phrases you use would be nice to, for
those of us that cannot understand japanese.