"Stupid uncute tomboy", he muttered as his eyes got heavy....

nitpick:  there are three dots in an ellipsis.  ^_^;

Actually, it's correct as written.  Three dots in an ellipsis, yes.  
However, a period is still needed at the end of the sentence, for a total of 
four.  If you don't believe me, check a decent grammar text.

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Erik

"What's more dangerous than a mage out to rule the entire world?  Why, a 
mage at play, of course...."

        -Ed Greenwood, "Elminster at the Magefair"

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