Ok, I'm gonna regret this... but here is my first complete story (or at 
least
the first chapter of it). Be kind, this is my first time posting a story to
the list. If you're an fan of the Akane-Ranma relationship, turning around
now.

     Nice header.  That Akane-Ranma warning is exactly the kind of thing to 
get me interested in a fic.

	"I wanted to eat my lunch first. I'm sure Yukio and the others are doing
alright without me." She held out an onigiri towards him. "Want one?"
	"Good point," Laughed Nabiki smiling, "Here, I'm full," She tossed a kaki 
to
him, then turned and walked towards the school buildings.

     I like this characterization.  Who says Nabiki can't be a little 
generous?  It's just a small amount food.  It's not a big sacrafice or 
anything.  Nabiki can be kind too.

	*Nabiki sure has a nice smile.*

     She also has a nice smirk, a nice sardonic grin, nice eyes, nice hair, 
nice shorts, etc.

     Ha!  The one true couple can go to limbo.  Ranma and Nabiki, now that's 
a great couple.  Every fanfiction I've read that pairs those two together 
has been great.  The Tales-of-Ranma-and-Nabiki was great, until the author 
got tired of it and did a quickie ending.  Donny Cheng's works were 
heartbreakingly romantic.  John Biles' stuff has great possibilities.  This 
fic could be great too.  No pressure though.


Caine


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