Subject: Re: [ffml][DTP][BGC] Dominion Crisis prologue
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 7/10/1999, 11:48 PM
To: "Trevor Hoffert" <battlekrome@HOTMAIL.COM>
CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>

Trevor Hoffert wrote:



                 Dominion Crisis
Dominion Tank Police / Bubblegum Crisis X-over

Now I haven't seen this one before.


Prologue

One of the thing Leona prided herself on was her skill at driving and
her
gunnery skills

Two 'skills' close together. 'marksmanship' could probably be substiitued
for the second

while driving and using her Bonaparte to fight crime. When
her Bonaparte was destroyed in that horrible accident she was depressed
for
days

Given her fetish for it, I should say so.

only rousing out to look over the scematics for Bonaparte again. The
rest of the force tried and tried to get her to face up to the loss

Playing 'grenade golf', perhaps? ^_^

and
perhaps built a Bonaparte II. Most shocking of all was finally when she
seemed to be over her loss, Leona put in a transfer to another police
department. Leona in her request cited she was unable to continue working
where every one

everyone


something the rest of the crew thought was brilliant give her Bonaparte
II.
Thus the tank garage was declared off limits to Leona, not that she went
there anyway. On the final day of her stay before her transfer to
Mega-Tokyo
to work with the AD Police.

Ah, so that explains the transfer. She has a death wish and joining the AD
Police is the closest thing to suidice she could come up with.



Al and the rest managed to drag her down to the
tank garage. When they took off the blindfold and revealed it to Leona
her

drop 'her'



Nene Romanov was usually called to show newcomers the ropes in the AD
Police patrol division

Blech! Breaking in newbies is always crap in any job.

 but since Leona was already at least a few years
her
senior in age as well as experience she

age, as...experience, she



"Leona that's the third time i've

I've



"Um could you sign here Miss?"

here, Miss


Leona took the pen from him and had signed as fast as she could

" Is Bonaparte out side??"

outside


"Well.." he reached up to scratch his head " it was put in the garage as
you
asked Miss"

asked, Miss


"yes!"

"Yes!"

 and with that Leona grabbed Nene and ran to the elevator to the
garage leaving the delivery boy in her wake. the

The


"Leona slow down.. your going to fast"

you're going too


They arrived down in the garage and beside

garage. Beside


symbols
on it. Nene was amazed how

at

covered it was. Then Nene recognized some of
the
signs as more at home on the AD Police's armory door.

Heh. Cute.


this thing was. Then it hit her, it was a TANK! A small one but there was
no
mistaking the tracks and the large turrent gun.

Yes. Those are somewhat idenitfying characteristcs of a tank. ^_^

 By then all the packing
was
off and the tank was revealed in all it's

its

glory.

"Leona this is a tank!"

Leona,


"yeah,

Yeah



"oh it

Oh, it

was a gift from my previous police friends, why?"

Nene remembered that the Newport police were famous for their damage
causing
ability

Rivaled only by the Patlabor SVD Unit 2. ^_^


"of

Of

 course not why'd

not. Why'd

"You mean you actually have live rounds in that thing?"

What did she think they do, run over offenders? ^_^


"That isn't ammuniton for the tank?"

"no, just the special rounds i like to use"

No,...I like


"special rounds?"

Special

Capitilize the first word of a sentence. Please.



"yeah, like AP, hellfire and some neat ones, the normal stuff is in the
other box in behind the tank"

"you actually exepect to fight crime in this?"

"yeah isn't that what AD police does??"

No. They usually act as bullet stoppers until the Knight Sabres show up..


"well... AD police usually is called upon to fight Boomers"

Of course, an actual tank might actual enable Leona to survive her first
couple encounters.


"oh you mean the robot thingies , But you do have to admit Bonaparte does
look cute."

Nene had to admit the tank did look cute, but so could a girl in a bunny
suit holding a M-60.

Got a picture of one hanging on my wall. She is a cutie. ^_^



Author notes:

Whoo hoo a prologue done now to get the the real nitty gritty stuff an
actuall chapter heh heh.
For those who don't know Dominon Tank Police is a very rarely fanfic'ed
anime, and i thought i'd put my spin on it. hopefully most of it is in
character but.. hey it's my fanfic. also it's a first fic too.
and i tend to do the e.e. cummings thing. I almost never capitalize i,
go
figure.

Please start then. Seeing small case letters a the start of every sentence
tends to be annoying to many readers.



Need to work on the grammar a lot. Aside from that this set up the
situation nicely, what a prologue is supposed to do. I am kind of curious
as to what destroyed Bonaparter I though.

D.B. Sommer