I don't like Asuka much.

She just gets on my nerves.

And I AM the author of Something Snapped, after all...

I don't want to offend anyone, but I felt that this just had to be written, 
if only to get it out of my head.

And also as a prelude to doing something about "Tank Cop's" ABYSMAL 'Tough 
Love'.

Here we go...

And LIME warning.

This is definitely Lime.

It's actually quite dark as well.

Why Asuka REALLY Doesn't Like Rei
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              OR...

Sound Spanky Evangelion!
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"Asuka Souryuu Langley."

The words were leaden, filled with the hint of anger.

"Hai?"

"Let's look at this again, shall we?"

Gendou turned to a screen, and started the video running.

It showed Unit-02, sprinting across a field.

It then showed Unit-02 falling face-first into a house.

"And why did that happen?"

"Shinji called out. I... I was distracted by the screen..."

"Rei did not fall. She did not kill a family."

"But... but... If they'd got into a shelter they'd be fine!"

"This was a training exercise."

Asuka fell silent.

"And what about this?"

Another video. Another humiliating failure. Another event in which she was 
shown up by Rei.

And another.

And another.

"And now there is this."

Gendou held up a report card.

"Asuka, do you know exactly how bad this is?"

"N-no, commander..."

"Abysmal. Atrocious. I run out of words."

Asuka couldn't face him any longer.

"I'm... I'm sorry..."

"Come here."

So it was to come down to this again.

Asuks spread herself across the desk, determined not to show any sign of 
pain. She felt Gendou raise her skirt, and slide down her panties. She 
wasn't particularly bothered; she knew he wouldn't take advantage of her.

It was a soldier/commander relationship, and no more.

No more.

The first stroke drove her forward over the desk, hard. He was using the 
paddle, as he had before. She was glad that the riding crop never came out 
of the drawer.

The second was just as vicious, and the sting was becoming too severe for 
her.

She bit her lip, and closed her eyes tightly.

The third nearly made her bite though her lip.

"You have got to do better. Better than Rei, better than Shinji... Rei, 
granted, has trained almost as long as you."

The next blow forced a few tears across her cheeks.

"You have to do better. Even Shinji is doing better than you."

Another one... she squeaked. The tears were beginning to flow now.

"You should be at least as good as Rei. At least."

Again.

She couldn't hold them back; the tears started to flow in earnest now.

It was the ultimate humiliation to her: The strong, powerful, invulnerable 
second child crying like a baby as she was spanked.

And being reminded of her inferiority to Rei in the process.

***

Gendou looked down at the sobbing second child. It was enough, he thought. 
He had to grind down her arrogance, had to make her more malleable, a better 
team player. He'd looked on in horror as she'd attacked the seventh angel, 
and caused the biggest embarassment so far to NERV.

Something had had to be done.

And this was it.

"You may go, Asuka."

Gendou dropped the paddle in his drawer, and sighed as she left the room. He 
hated doing it; it was all he could do to keep detatched from it while he 
performed the operation.

He hated it. More than anything else in this world.

***

Asuka made her way over to the medical rooms; she was glad that it was Maya 
on today and not Ritsuko. Maya would not let this get back to Misato.

"Maya..."

"What's been going on? You've been crying!"

She hurried over to Asuka, and helped her over to a seat, stroking the tears 
away from her face.

"Sit down. Tell me what's wrong."

"I-I'd rather not..."

Understanding dawned in Maya's face.

"The paddle again, hmmm?"

Asuka nodded, shamefaced.

"Don't worry. My father did much the same to me. And afterwards, I'd sneak 
out to a friend's, and then I'd lose the pain..." Maya trailed off, thinking 
about before the Second Impact.

"Come on. Over the couch."

Asuka recoiled, and then realised that Maya had something else in mind.

"This used to help me. A nice pot of cold cream. It soothes the skin. Go on, 
take them off. I don't think you've got anything that I haven't seen 
before..."

Blushing, Asuka slid her panties down. She heard the clinking of the lid as 
it was removed, and then bucked slightly, with a faint hiss through her 
teeth, as the cold cream touched her reddened behind. Maya started to 
massage the cream against her cheeks, slowly taking the sting out.

Asuka jumped as Maya's hand brushed a much more intimate place.

Again... she bucked backwards against the hand.

"My, Asuka, hold on a bit." Maya sounded amused. "Even I wasn't that forward 
with my friends..."

Asuka suddenly remembered what was said about Maya. She blushed harder as 
she realised what she was doing.

But still... the sting was fading, but the heat was spreading out and in, 
into places she'd much ratger it left alone... into places that were 
generating their own 'coolant', as it were.

Again, with the hand... she was burning up.

"My, my, Asuka," came Maya's amused voice. "You seem to be finding the 
*other* way my friends and I found to still the sting..."

Was Maya purring?

Another gobbet of cream was pressed against her behind, and Asuka, almost 
unable to hold back, pushed backwards.

"Asuka?"

"Do it, Maya... Please..."

"Asuka, I shouldn't."

"Well stop it! stop driving me crazy with your verdamnt hands!"

"I'm sorry..."

And again.

Asuka reached behind her, and grabbed Maya's hands. She couldn't stop now...

***

Asuka walked home, seething. Rei had forced her into that. REI!

She'd do something about that later.

But first...

She'd have a bath.

The heat was still troublesome.

***

"Maya?"

"Yes, Akagi-san?"

"I saw."

Maya froze, just for a fraction of a second.

"Saw what?"

"What you did with Asuka."

"I don't know what you m-mean."

"Yes you do."

Maya hung her head, in just as much shame as Asuka was.

"I've decided to do something about it. Gendou would fire you, but me... 
well, let's just say I have something else in mind."

Ritsuko pulled out Gendou's paddle from behind her back.

"Do you think that this is appropriate?"

***

Again, feminine wails and slapping noises were heard in NERV HQ...


I honestly don't know where a lot of this has come from. I will be the first 
to admit that I'm a hentai in this respect.

At least it didn't go lemon, ne?

I didn't intend it to go dark like that either. It just happened.


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