On Wed, 21 Jul 1999, ~Zuzanna Capulet~ wrote:

Hi!

This is my first C&C.  Wish me luck!
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I noticed a lot of spelling errors.

	Nabiki stagers into the dinning room eyes the letters drowsily and 
proceeds to gather hears she notices one labeled "To the parents/gardiens 
of Ranma Soutome" and a similar one labeled for Akane.

     Nabiki staggers into the dining room, eyes the letters drowsily, and 
proceeds to gather hers.  While going through her letters she notices two 
simular envelopes, addressed: 'To the parents/guardians of Ranma Saotome and 
a simular one labelled for Akane.

similar

Do not go forth to correct spelling without your trusty dictionary. :)

	Akane woken by the sound of Nabiki staggering thought the house partially 
conches notices the letters lying on the floor.

        Akane,woken by the sound of Nabiki staggering throughout the house

conches???

conscious 

And if I misspelled that one, somebody smack me.

<*Smeg boy people shur can be violent in Japan.... Now where the heck is 
Friken High?*> he calmly asks no one inparticulare.

inparticular

in particular

regains contiosness"

conciousness

consciousness

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	 Joanne Wojtysiak			joanna@cs.ualberta.ca

         I can please only one person per day. Today is not your day.
                     Tomorrow isn't looking good either.