Hi,
     Excellent work as usual. I especially liked the revised scenes
concerning
Lina's posse's discussion with Luna. I find the new scenes work far better
to
convey Luna's feelings than what was previously shown. Oh and I'm not sure
but I suspect that the place that the king sent Zelgadis, namely Kalmaart,
sounds
like a spoof of a certain mass merchant which I shall not name. Then again
I'm
probably wrong. Oh well.
     Well that's it for now. Keep up the great work and I look forward to
more in the future. Oh and I apologize for not responding sooner. I sent
this out twice but unfortunately it was never recieved. This was due to the
fact that I misspelled the e-mail address twice. Hopefully this time I'll
get
it right.

Sayonara
Reispirit
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My hand is the divine fist.
Blossom oh fallen seed and
call upon thy hidden powers.
Bring forth the glorious mother of
Destruction!!!!!!!!
  -Grahf "The Emperor of Darkness"
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