Ho boy, was that crazy.  Loved it.

I like the way you used the different writing styles (good/bad) for the
different worlds.  And having Gendo do all those F$%&ed up Star Wars
references were fun, too.  Even if they sounded a bit contrived.

Two nits:

First, the word wrap didn't work.  It broke down into long line/short
line/long line/short line.  Try using fewer columns.

Oh, and next time, don't forget to put the [lemon] tag in your message.

Lawrence

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