Hey, for an Original, this was pretty good.  I think it needed to be a 
little more discriptive of the appearances of the mecha, though.

I was thinking, maybe we should add another tag to original fics, to tell 
what kind of story it is, like this one had.  The [Mecha] Tag was what 
really drew me to read this fic.

Other tag could be:

[MG] or [MGirl] for Magical Girl-type stories, ala Sailor Moon/Rayearth.

[MA] or [MArts] for Martial Arts stories, like Ranma or Street Fighter.  A 
[Z] could be added if you do it DBZ-style.

[Mecha] for well, mecha-style stories, like Gundam or this one.

[Rom] for Romantic fics.

[RoCom] for Romantic Comedies

and so on.  Any other Ideas?

SAMAS

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