Gregg, I argee... this Omake DESERVES a bigger setting. (And in my opn. I
rather see it expanded, than twisted...)
Amdrew
----- Original Message -----
From: Richard Robinson <RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net>
To: Gregg Sharp <metroanime@mindspring.com>
Cc: fanfic list FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Wednesday, September 22, 1999 8:24 PM
Subject: [FFML][more comments]Twisted the board game ch 5 + omake (part 2)

To finish the last letter, ( my roommate got a call on the
computer ) I had to send it unedited and unfinished.

Twelfth Ending. Ukyo, poor Ukyo I hope she's into new
things.

Notes I have heard that rumor about Akane becoming a good
cook but as far as I can tell it is only in specific items,
that she can cook, not that she would admit it. So the
intentional poisoning is probably out, unless you count
subconsciously doing it. I mean she doesn't admit to who
P-Chan is and likes Ryoga.

Omake When You Wish Upon a Sword.!!!!!!
Now you have done it, this Omake demands to be a story and
loudly demands to be continued. This is the best plot idea
and delivery I have seen since Source of Pride ( Demon Dad )
or Rune with a view. It deserves to expanded as much as A
Very Scary Bet. I was very very impressed, with the Ranma's
thoughts and his decision and what happened to him and how
his family handled it. I would love to see the reaction in a
couple of days. I hope Grey gets a GENUINE REWARD for this
one.
I hope you win some awards  for best idea/story.
Looking forward to more. Oh buy the way Twisted was fun, not
your best not your worst but fun, but you spoiled most of it
by putting it with this other GREAT story. Always make the
omake something less than the main story, in other words
don't have the Beatles open for the Archies.
--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
 can't believe that."
                               -- Benjamin Hutchins