Well, just to show you this story isn't dead (hey, it's only been about five months) here is a  teaser. Hopefully more to follow before too long. It depends on the muse, as always.

I suggest you take Miss Calliope (or whoever the muse of fanfics is) down to the basement with a heatlamp and have words with her. Great to see your back on this one. As good as your other stuff is this is so far my favorite. I always enjoy the attempts to mix the superhero genre with Magna but it is so easy to screw up that most of the time it is hardly worth following. Just a few nits

A thrown billy club connected with the side of Stuntmaster's helmet,
producing a ringing sensation, but otherwise leaving him unharmed. His eyes followed the path of the attacking weapon, which bounced once on the floor before returning to the hand of its wielder.

Considering how you've been writing the other Avengers so far remember that while this is indeed Daredevil it is still definitely Mousse as well. He should be using a lot more then just a billy club.

All eyes turned to see the man, standing next to open area where the window had been a moment ago. He was wearing a loose-fitting, blood red robe and a red mask with two tiny horns on the head. The lower portion of the mask was cut out, allowing the masked adventurer to talk without any obstructions. Two overlapping 'D's in black lettering were clear on the center of his chest.

Not to spoil your very funny gag later on but why would a Chinese vigilante based in Japan be wearing Romanji insignia at all?

"Oh my god!" Stuntmaster gasped. "It's Batman!"

Cute

Once there was a break in the gunfire, Daredevil shouted, "Shouldn't you be in school, little boy?"

"Where do you think I scored these guns?" Spridal snapped back, then sent another burst near Daredevil's location.

Very nice, never underestimate the kid sidekick.

up, the superhero known as Daredevil, the Man Without Fear, headed towards a certain pool hall in Nerima, where he was expected by someone whom it was unwise to disappoint.

Just have to ask, does Stick have a tendency to balance on her pool cue and is it safe to assume that Shampoo's trading her bonbori in for a pair of sai? Keep up the good work.

                                Bill Morse

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