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Unlike some of the other Ranma/Matrix fics I've seen, this one seems quite
good. It does have its faults, however.
Primarily that it seems a bit rushed. I just couldn't wrap my mind around
Ranma agreeing to go with Neo so quickly, despite Ranma being used to
strangeness on a daily basis.
I liked the bit about this portion of the Matrix being warped or out of
control, and the possible effects of that. Very nice touch. Leaves open a
nice avenue for plot advancement, finding out why, deling with it, etc.
All in all, quite good. If you are planning to continue this, I look
forward to more. If not, please reconsider.
Going on the assumption that it will go forward, I'd like to get this up on
the Superhighway. Are you planning on posting it anywhere on the web?
Red
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