(sigh)
Ken Arromdee wrote:
I am extremely tempted to write a spamfic where Kunou celebrates Independence
Day on July 4. While we're at it, I can have Bean Bandit and Rally celebrate
Culture Day (which is was Wednesday of last week, by the way.)
Remember, not all the world is the USA. I can understand your intentions in
writing this, but it ends up feeling like it's written by one of those
ugly-American tourists who travel to other countries and are shocked to find
out that people don't accept dollars in stores and usually don't even speak
English.
"The wise man points to the moon, and the imbecile looks at the finger."
-ancient Chinese proverb
Sometimes it is best not to question that something is done on a certain
day; it is only whether it is done or not. One does not need to be
American to remember, after all.
Critiques: There were small spelling errors in the work: "happening",
"students". Could have used more description to better paint the
scene. Overall, wasn't much of a story in and of itself; then again,
wasn't meant to be.
Good job.
-- Nick