A kareoke bar. Great. Jadeite sighed as he lowered
"Put a smile on your face...Make the world a better
place..."
*shudder* Please - anything but that song!
Just how much are you changing the Dark Kingdom?
After all,
if Beryl is still doing the Evil Tyrant thing, then
presumably
she'd be playing her chief lieutenants against each
other,
fostering rivalry and mutual suspicion, not mutual
affection.
I obviously didn't make it clear enough that this
doesn't take part in the actual D.K - it becomes
obvious further along but prehaps I need something
solid near the beginning.
And since no one knows what the Generals were like
before Beryl it's basically free reign :)
Naru: Molly? Who is this "Molly" bimbo?
That was one of my big mistakes :) Originally I used
Molly in the story before it was pointed out by my
beta reader that it should be Naru. When I went
through and changed them I somehow managed to miss a
couple and even though I read over it I didn't pick it
up for some reason.
The theme for the "The Young And The Restless"
begins to play...
No, that can't start until I reveal that Nephrite is
really Jadeite's long lost twin brother and that Usagi
is Beryl and Kunzite's love child. THEN you can play
your music :)
Jadeite: Well you see with the way he cheated on me
while he had
amnesia, and what my evil twin did on that cruise
liner with Usagi
while I was lost in the jungle and the way my
ex-girlfriend who is now
my ex-boyfriend got decapitated and now I have to
hover by his bedside
while...
Or that could do!
"I thought I had lost you" he whispered, burying
his head in Nephrite's hair.
"Never" the taller man vowed.
Nephrite: But would you be interested in a
threesome?
Jadeite: *Hits Nephrite* Hentai. Do you think of
anything else?
Nephrite: *blinks* What else is there to think about?
Well, you are doing a yaoi take on a shojo series I
suppose and
other people may have a greater tolerance for soppy
romance thanI do.
To each there own :) Soppy romance is what I tend to
write - in the future I'll try to warn people to keep
a toothbrush near by!
Thanks for taking the time out to reply - you made
some interesting as well as entertaining comments!
Cairnsy
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Jadeite/Nephrite fanfiction, art and more by Cairnsy at http://www.geocities.com/cairnsynz/jednef1.html
Memoirs in Jade - a Jadeite Fanfiction archive, includes both yaoi and non-yaoi stories at http://www.geocities.com/jeddyteddy/home.html
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