Lawrence Chu wrote:
"Oh, Kanrinin-san." He noted her black dress and the paper-
wrapped bundle she carried. "Is it that time, already?" he
asked.
Not to nitpick, but she generally didn't wear black to visit
Souichirou's grave; while this is a clue as to what she's doing, I'm not
sure it fits her character.
Actually, in the manga, she has a particular black dress that she wears to
all the funerals. I don't know what it's like in the anime, though.
Actually (after checking once again) it varied... The first visit she
wore
white (or another light color) and the second in some medium color; the
third visit is when the black dress comes out. (I had just watched the
anime
ep of the second visit, so that's why it din't feel right to me...)
Nitpick withdrawn.
The only real nitpick I had was that there's no mention of
*SPOILERSPOILERTHEIRCHILDSPOILERSPOILER* anywhere within the fic. You'd
figure that she'd be right there too...right?
I KNEW there was something else I wanted to say! (my own child drew me
away from the computer for a good hour is the midst of typing, so I lost
my train of thought.) Where is the little (okay, not so little in story
time) rugrat? If alive, she should be with Kyoko - and if not...
Bridget
--
"I choose you - PIKASPEW!!!"
Jamie to 2 month old daughter Madeline,
shortly after being spat up upon...
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